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    Posted: 14 Sep 2012 at 12:10pm
http://soundcloud.com/naoisemchugh/random-somewhat-metalish-lick

Would someone be so kind as to feedback please? It's only a short one xD
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote UMUR Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Sep 2012 at 12:32pm
ehh...Im not sure is long enough for me to really comment on Geek. Play it for a few bars more and develop a bit more on it. Maybe change the rythm after a couple of bars. I guess I can hear potential anywaySmile.
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Thanks, I'll get to that now :3
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yeah way too short dude
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